Comments on: #383 – Fang the merciless

By: Lady_Nilstria

Lady_Nilstria — Tue, 27 Jan 2009 06:53:23 +0000

Zedwig pushing Fangline off the side seems to anticlimactic to me. >_> All I can imagine is Fang screaming like a little girl while rag doll physics make him look silly. O_o

I want to know what's happening to Al'bert. T-T

By: Lady Nilstria

Lady Nilstria — Mon, 26 Jan 2009 22:53:23 +0000

Zedwig pushing Fangline off the side seems to anticlimactic to me. >_> All I can imagine is Fang screaming like a little girl while rag doll physics make him look silly. O_o

I want to know what's happening to Al'bert. T-T

By: Faticia

Faticia — Sun, 25 Jan 2009 23:40:50 +0000

Blast him, Bactine! Blast him! And then, through the sheer strength of your love for Sangwine, don't faint after blasting Fang, but manage to retain enough composure to heal Sangwine. Then you can faint because you will most likely have knocked Fang off of the balcony. If that doesn't kill him, it will at least buy time! (my advice to Bactine) Oh, try to not knock Zedwig off the balcony while your at it.

(Advice to Zedwig) RESIST! You can do it! Take the earing off! The shock of that much resistance from you will buy Bactine the needed time. After that, then if can be figured out what to do with Fang (like push him off the side!).

By: Nightlyre

Nightlyre — Sun, 25 Jan 2009 21:54:21 +0000

*rofl*

By: Zypher

Zypher — Sun, 25 Jan 2009 21:40:04 +0000

No rewrite, keep going forward!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I'm just a little hooked, really. Only a little…

By: LadyFox

LadyFox — Sun, 25 Jan 2009 21:36:11 +0000

Ok... I am officially dying for the next installment. *nurses taking her blood pressure and pulse and wheeling her into the O.R. even as she types!*

Colby's writing is so very refreshing, that I feel a little sheepish making predictions, but my current theory, based on what the fortune teller told her, is that Bactine will make a lunge to connect with Sangwine and will have enough time to pull his injury into herswelf, but not the time or presence of mind with Fang yanking her around to heal herself afterwards and will die. The healed Sang will now have the incentive he needs, based on what TEITNL said, to really fight Fang for the throne so that he can become king and use the boosted powers over the illusion that is life and death to save Bactine.

Of course that doesn't answer what Sang saw in the hallway about Xylic (I'm assuming Aunt Ellinya is the "Lin" of Xylic's dad's letters, and that he is Sang's cousin, but that too could be wrong. Waht was on that painting? Inquiring minds want to know!) It also doesn't answer what will become of zombie Zedwig. Poor Zed, he got his hopes up and let his guard down I guess, and therefore wasn't prepared to resist Fang. He looks like a dishrag.... (a very pretty dishrag, but still)

Alternately I suppose Fang will make a deal with Bactine that he'll let her heal his worthless brother if she will just heal his mage here first, knowing that it will kill her. If she survives it (because Bactine is naturally talented uber healer even if she's a bit light on theory) she'll heal Sang, but not have enough left in her to heal herself. Rinse and repeat with above.

These are only theories though. Colby always manages to surprise me.

By: LadyFox

LadyFox — Sun, 25 Jan 2009 21:26:43 +0000

I think Colby stated their ages once someplace, and Xylif was younger than Sang….

By: colbycheese

colbycheese — Sun, 25 Jan 2009 20:15:47 +0000

Oh man…. can I rewrite everything now? AWESOME.

By: Deva Bienevu

Deva Bienevu — Sun, 25 Jan 2009 19:08:53 +0000

Too bad Bactine can't consult Calvexia the Bog Witch now.

This would be a good time too for us for Mabel to suddenly burst on the scene and kick Fang's butt. Because you know Mabel could do it.
That's what Xylic was always trying to tell everyone.
Yeah. You know it.

By: A Reader

A Reader — Sun, 25 Jan 2009 18:01:46 +0000

Wow. That sounded very cool and knowledge-y. (I wish I could impress people with cool and knowledge-y paragraphs) But there's just one thing…..these are FANTASY early guns. Who knows what they work like?